Commendable effort I suppose, but you are not a fluent speaker and a lot of your Russian sentences are unnatural or sometimes just wrong, and need to be fixed. I would suggest releasing all of them up for adoption - for every sentence, you can do that by clicking on the gray person icon left of your username in the upper right corner above the sentence. Then a native speaker like myself could adopt them (by clicking on the same icon, now with no username next to it) and edit those that need to be edited to make them sound correct/natural.
Thanks for offering to correct them) I will release all of them for adoption.
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